Friday, October 15, 2010

Patriotism

I think that patriotism does still matter because think of all the people are fighting for our freedom in other country and they are dying for us and also think of all the hurt.
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5 comments:

  1. Danny K.October 18, 2010 at 4:24 AM

    I agree. I would make this longer and make it into a more detailed responce.

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  2. Megann MauchOctober 18, 2010 at 4:28 AM

    This is a good thought but if it was longer i think that you can add more thought and detail to it to have it be a really nice piece.

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  3. LindsayOctober 18, 2010 at 4:36 AM

    This is a good sentence beginning but now add on to it.

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  4. AndrewOctober 18, 2010 at 4:39 AM

    I agree with Lindsay the beginning was great, but it would be even better if it was a longer.

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  5. Nick KOctober 18, 2010 at 4:52 AM

    short and sweet

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